The Wyvern’s Spur

Author: Kate Novak and Jeff Grubb
Published: February 1990

I’ve been looking forward to reviewing this one for a while now. In some ways, it’s easily dismissed as an unoriginal work which is highly derivative of another, better-known author. Stop me if you’ve heard this one before: A foppish, foolish aristocrat with more money than sense lives with his uncannily competent valet. Everyone considers him a useless wastrel, and he lives in fear of his domineering aunt. He gets into and out of a variety of domestic and social scrapes in an amusing fashion. Sound familiar? It should if you’ve ever read any of the “Jeeves & Wooster” stories of famed British humourist P.G. Wodehouse, because it’s basically Bertie Wooster transplanted into the Forgotten Realms.

Stephen Fry and Hugh Laurie as Jeeves & Wooster in the excellent BBC series.

But from another perspective, this very unoriginality makes it original: this may be the first of the Forgotten Realms books we’ve looked at so far which veers away from the standard “heroic fantasy” template. As a pastiche of the works of Wodehouse, it straddles the line between traditional heroic fantasy and the “fantasy of manners“, a genre which emphasizes the social aspects of the fantasy world over the action and questing and all that. There’s some magic and swordplay here, sure, but there’s also a lot of time spent on the Wyvernspurs’ family politics and intrigues. It’s about one-third comedy of manners, one-third mystery novel, and one-third swashbuckling action, which adds up to a much greater focus on the characters and their society than any of the other Realms novels to date. The rest, as befits their D&D roots, have all been focused on combat, travel, and exploration, but The Wyvern’s Spur is the first one that feels less like “D&D fiction” and more like a story that just happens to be set in the Forgotten Realms.

He shuddered again and wished that he’d stayed in Westgate, where all he’d had to worry about were dragons, earthquakes, and power struggles. They really were insignificant compared to these family crises.

And in some ways it even improves upon its inspiration. Giogioni, who started out in Azure Bonds as simply a fantasy version of Bertie Wooster, gets a degree of character development and humanization in this novel which Wooster never got at Wodehouse’s hands. By the end of the novel, Giogi has grown up and matured in a way that would have felt out-of-place in the goofy comedies of the Jeeves series, where Wooster perpetually remains a disaster-prone man-child. And it’s free to explore heavier subject matter with a much more serious tone than Wodehouse’s light-hearted novels; I’d describe it as “mostly drama with some comedy mixed in.”


(Since a fair amount of this plot is a whodunit mystery, I’ll tread lightly to avoid spoilers.)

In the sleepy Cormyrean town of Immersea, the local noble family, the Wyvernspurs, are reeling from the brazen theft of an ancient family heirloom. Worse yet, one of their own might be the culprit. Giogioni Wyvernspur, the foppish black sheep of the family, stumbles home from his adventures in the previous book to find himself embroiled in the family emergency, which takes a more serious turn when one of his relatives turns up magically murdered. In the process of discovering what happened he uncovers family secrets, fights hordes of undead and a mad wizard, and drinks lots of tea.

Meanwhile, the halfling bard Olive Ruskettle finds herself in Immersea and gets swept up into the plot when a friend of hers is killed. Thanks to her adventures with Alias, she’s much more aware of what’s going on than the Wyvernspurs — but she spends much of the novel unable to talk, reduced to gathering information in a four-footed form while thinking cynical, snarky thoughts. It’s nice to see Olive getting entire chapters to herself; her viewpoint scenes were some of the liveliest parts of Azure Bonds, refreshingly devoid of pretentious fantasy tropes. While she’s a bit more mature and less sociopathic than she was in the previous novel, she’s no less fun to watch.

The comedy aspects are genuinely funny, but then I’m a sucker for that sort of dry British-style humour. The mystery aspects are no Agatha Christie material, but still sufficiently twisty to keep things interesting. The action bits are generally pretty good, especially since Giogi is an inexperienced low-level fighter who’s more at home in a drawing room than a dungeon, and is in mortal danger from even a handful of zombies. Fight scenes here don’t have the sort of boring inevitability that they do in R.A. Salvatore‘s novels, where the characters are all unstoppable juggernauts of messy death.

It all ties in nicely with the plot of Azure Bonds, with a few of Alias’ “relatives” showing up to complicate matters, but stands on its own as an independent story even if you don’t read either of the other books in the Finder’s Stone trilogy. There’s one plot point that rests too much on coincidence for my liking — that Flattery and Cat should have randomly happened to meet and team up — but I’m willing to give it a pass because they have a good dynamic together.


Giogioni is a consistently engaging and fun character to spend a novel with. The authors have beefed him up from his goofy one-note appearances in Azure Bonds, retaining the British upper-class mannerisms and some of the silliness, but giving him a deeper characterization as a compassionate, thoughtful young man with a family legacy to live up to. The end result is a lovable loser who’s torn, like Tolkien’s hobbits, between the familiar comforts of home and the lure of adventure in the wider world. His family still thinks he’s the same foolish, accident-prone dandy he’s always been, but they can’t see that he’s growing out of that role into something more mature and capable. Even he’s only partially aware of how much his recent travels have changed him. Much of the character development for both him and his family revolves around that gradually dawning realization.

Olive is the only one of the main characters from Azure Bonds who returns here. She’s wiser and kinder now after her character development arc in that book, but still a trickster and an unrepentant thief. It’s fun to watch her struggle with her sudden respectability; she’s got everyone fooled into thinking she’s a famous bard and a Harper, but has only a vague idea of how such a person would actually act. As befits her role of “the sneaky one”, she does most of the sleuthing which explains the plot to the reader, though she doesn’t tell much of what she knows to the other characters.

Cat makes a good foil to Alias from Azure Bonds. They’re both strong-willed, practical, and stubborn, but that’s where the similarities end. Cat is duplicitous instead of forthright, charismatic instead of blunt-spoken, and willing to submit to years of emotional abuse instead of being fiercely independent. It’s nice to see a novel that actually addresses serious issues like abusive relationships in a reasonably nuanced way. She knows that Flattery is evil and is terrified of him, but she still feels she needs him and desperately wants his approval. Abusive relationships in fiction are all too often resolved with “Well, why don’t you leave him, then?” “…Okay!”, and then it’s over. It’s never that simple in real life.

Flattery makes an acceptable villain. He’s your basic power-mad evil wizard stereotype, but he’s got a good backstory which both explains his motivations and ties him into the plot of the previous book. Also, his brand of impulsive, uncontrollable rage is more genuine and frightening than the kind of moustache-twirling vaudeville villainy we saw in books like Black Wizards. As such, I’m prepared to cut him more slack than I would your average power-mad evil wizard.

The supporting cast is quite good. Thomas the butler and Dorath the domineering old aunt are clearly borrowed from Wodehouse, but have been changed enough in the process that it feels more like a case of inspiration than plagiarism. The entire Wyvernspur clan makes an appearance, and they’re all given distinctive mannerisms, personalities, and motivations. This is great for two reasons: it means that the reader doesn’t lose track of who’s who in the family, and it often puts them at odds with one another, driving the plot forward with juicy internecine intrigue. But it’s not just the protagonist’s family who get that treatment. Even the most minor of characters, like the barkeep in a briefly-visited tavern or Giogi’s upper-class twit friends, get the sort of distinct personalities and details that make them memorable.


Like its predecessor, personal identity is the core theme of The Wyvern’s Spur. Giogioni wants to deny his destiny and cling to his “useless fop” identity, but by the end is forced to accept who he is and finds his self-confidence in the process. Cat has no idea who she is or where she came from. Without getting into spoilers, Flattery’s complicated relationship with his parent involves a serious identity crisis. And Olive loses her identity in a very literal manner, spending half of the novel polymorphed into a domestic animal and unable to communicate. By the end, everyone’s worked out their problems and learned something about themselves in the process.

Identity problems are generally a great way to make characters compelling. You’ve got the characters who think they’re one thing but don’t want to admit they’re another, like Giogioni and Dorath; the reader knows this but the character doesn’t, and it’s satisfying to watch the realization finally dawn on them. You’ve got the characters who don’t know who they are, like Cat; their plight elicits sympathy and it’s satisfying to see them grow in confidence as they work it out. You’ve got the characters who deliberately hide their true identities, like Olive; it’s fun to watch them con and mislead the other characters. In every case, it’s entertaining to watch and usually involves the characters changing and growing in the process. (There’s also the identity trick where you set up a mysterious character and the reader doesn’t know who they are until it’s dramatically revealed, like Flattery, but that’s less narratively satisfying since it’s generally a one-shot revelation rather than a gradual build-up.)


There are some issues. The overall quality is quite high, which makes the occasional awkward bits stand out more dramatically.

“I agreed to help you sneak the spur from the crypt,” Julia said, desperately trying to convince her brother of her loyalty.

That’s a pretty cardinal sin for writers there: having the narration tell us internal details about non-viewpoint characters. Remember, “show, don’t tell.” You shouldn’t have to tell us that she’s desperately trying to convince her brother; if you do a good job of showing her pleading, the reader will figure out her intentions and mental state on their own. Sentences like this crop up infrequently, but stand out enough that I couldn’t help but notice.

As with its predecessor, the pacing in The Wyvern’s Spur is quite good. Action sequences are interspersed with social scenes, and exposition is something which the characters have to earn by successfully navigating scenes of suspense or danger. The natural ebb and flow of the story keeps your interest sharp and makes you want to keep reading.

What really sells me on this book, though, is the quality of the details. Characters mention famous artists, half-remember snatches of nursery rhymes, play complicated card games [1], have quaint local traditions — things which don’t mean much individually, but when taken together add up to the impression of a vibrant culture surrounding them. The town of Immersea is described rather vividly, with attention paid to the details of its bustling daily life and how its streets look and feel in all sorts of weather. Fifteen generations of Giogioni’s family tree are recorded in an inset at the front of the book, and quite a few of the names on it are either mentioned in conversation or directly relevant to the plot. Novak and Grubb have done a good job of making the world feel like a living place, rather than just a stage where the characters play their parts.

One aspect that I found annoying was that partway through the book, the magic-using characters start triggering their magic spells with ordinary English words and phrases, when every other book has established that the verbal components of spells sound like gibberish to the uninitiated. It’s a conceit that lasts for about two thirds of a book before being unceremoniously dropped and never picked up by any other Realms novel again. [2]


Grade: A

Honestly, I wish more of these novels would dare to venture further afield from the standard “go on quest, fight monsters” tropes of the heroic fantasy genre. While I think that Azure Bonds was a slightly better novel, I’m willing to boost The Wyvern’s Spur from an A– to an A just for its willingness to bend, if not quite break, the mold. And the two of them are head and shoulders above the rest of the books we’ve looked at thus far. If I recall correctly, it’s going to be rather a while until they have any serious competition at the top.


[1] I must confess that I spent a fair amount of time as a kid trying to design a set of rules for Elemental Empires, the card game Giogi and his friends play at the inn, based on what few incidental details of the rules I could glean from the scene.

[2] Update: Looks like Elfshadow also used this approach, so it’s not quite as “never again” as I remembered. I stand corrected!

5 Replies to “The Wyvern’s Spur

  1. I have fonds memories of the Azure Bonds and the Wyvern’s Spurs. I read them when I was still a kid (I think I was about 12 when they were published in Spain). And I barely knew D&D then, so they were my introduction into RPG and fantasy worlds. Well, them and the Lord of the Rings. Which influenced my much more. But AB and WS were first and not least!

    Wyvern’s Spur is really well writen, and I enjoyed the intrigue and the family affairs. I was sorry that some characters were killed from the beginning (like Jade, one of Alias clones, who was also Drone Wyvernspur’s adoptive daughter and… the butler girlfriend!). I was somewhat disapointed that Giogi and the gang didn’t appear in more Forgotten Realms novels. Except in cormyr, I think.
    I remember but, a somewhat homophobic remark Giogi said when he fought Flattery. He said something like that the wizard was “weird” not to enjoy being married to a pretty girl like Cat. A m I misreading it?

    1. Yes, Giogi will make a brief reappearance in the unimaginatively named Cormyr: A Novel, but that’s it. It’s a shame, because he’s one of the best-realized characters in any of the Realms novels.

      Re: that remark:

      “I wonder,” Giogi continued, suddenly feeling more confident and mixing feints in with his attacks, “what kind of man has no respect for the elderly, no loyalty to his family, and prefers the company of undead to a beautiful woman? You know, Flattery, I don’t think you’re a man at all.”

      It’s an interesting point to consider. I don’t think he was trying to insinuate that Flattery was effeminate or gay with that remark; I think he was more pointing out Flattery’s apparent asexuality as another thing that made him seem like he’s not a human being. So if any group should be offended there, it’s asexuals.

  2. -With respect, I think Roger and our esteemed host are both reading way too much into that passage. I think Giogi is pointing out how warped it is for Flattery to prefer the company of ravening corpses animated by necromantic magic and malevolent soul-eating spirits. Flattery prefers the company of objectively monstrous horrors to that of living people who can choose their own ways in life. Flattery has no capacity for emotional attachment-he just wants things that he can forcibly control, whether through magical compulsion or physical abuse. That’s why he’s not a man.

    -Our host’s comments on ‘slice of life’ stories made me wonder about what kinds of stories could be told in a fantasy setting. Several years ago, I wrote a series of short stories set in the Fighting Fantasy world rather than Greyhawk and which were mostly anything but heroic adventures. One story centered around an elderly undertaker ruminating on how all the people in her funeral home died. Another had several street people and servants dressing up in the cast-offs of the rich and holding a feast in mock imitation of the nobles. A third story featured a merchant dealing with all the different customers coming up to his booth over the course of an evening.

    The stories could have all conceivably happened in the real world, but characters included trolls and dwarves and there were references to various types of magic and monsters. How many of these kinds of ‘slice of life’ stories have been explored not just in D&D, but a lot of fantasy writing in general?

  3. I love that they got Clyde Caldwell to do a sexy Olive on the cover and then made fun of Caldwell’s sexy women in the book.

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